Shivers [working title?]

SHIVERS
Admit it, baby
I'm your favorite scar (shivers)
You like it when it itches
When it reminds you of the pain (shivers)
You like to remember
When every word poisoned your blood
I know you don't wanna suffer
But this is something much deeper
They're shivers, they're shivers, they're shivers
My caresses are an act of violence
Everything to you that's holy
Gives you shivers, shivers, shivers
Damp air on your skin, I know
You want more, and more, and more
You see future constellations
Things you've felt long before
You put everything on speed-dial
In the casino of Neglected Dreams
The dealer gives you a wicked grin
Who knows, maybe you'll win
And that's when you feel it
My body on your skin
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hmmm, maybe the speed-dial is a bit jarring?
chorus needs a really tight, strong beat with riffs in between like NC's never heard. It's gonna be a hit – I can feel it.